→ spacedunce5:我覺得後半比較可愛耶XD 122.124.100.77 05/22 18:27
→ sylviaplath:i like crazy and bold stanzas :) 123.192.207.39 05/22 18:46
I like the anterior part of this poem, but the ending goes another direction.
Would be interesting to change the ending.
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