作者sylviaplath (plath)
看板poetry
標題[創作] Making Poems
時間Tue May 24 22:12:33 2011
Put some words together and make them rhyme
Would be better if they chime
Beats, stops, and pauses
Lack of any would be a mess
But what do you care than just spitting out your words
Spontaneous flow of nothingness
Flee, flee
Free thy saneness
It takes a lot more to top silence.
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推 spacedunce5:amazingly like the first plath!122.124.102.209 05/24 23:26
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