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Night quiet as spring creeks Summer heat burns amid mountain mists Rain came quicker than love Diminished the shattered whisper Hidden behind her coyness. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 123.192.216.18
spacedunce5:"Rain came quicker than love" a WOW line! 07/10 14:57
sylviaplath:the posterior lines are hideous, not poetic at all 07/11 01:36
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