推 dieEule:first stanza reminds me of a poem by plath 10/01 21:50
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→ dieEule:the sun" 10/01 21:51
Slowly you disppear from view
Like a balloon that bubbles
Of a foreign vowel, oddly-uttered and
Strangely unforgotten.
Your smile lies itself, alone
Under the gray concrete shadows and
Rebuilds a false memoir
To the sun.
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