My second poem....

[Chryseis (如果 一切都能重來)]

I wrote this poem when I was deeply down,so if there are something
wrong with it, I hope you won't mind it!!

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          The eclipse of memory
            by sad Daphne

Rain drops soaked through the sun blinder's brim,
'tis where left thy fragrance, truely I've ever dream.
Farewell, sole vagueness of thy passionate ring,
yea,frigid countenance tears apart the crystal heart,
Thou shalt hold me tight, nay tricking.

Wind dived into the night, I've envisioned,
transparent though ye be, actually, I was haunted
by words that magically enslaved.
Savvied, pain,as a pang, enclosed my mind then slaied ,
art thou nay hurt, cometh vague words I desired to ask in.

Pretend, becomes the strong mask of my agony,
so I attempt, traced a centain trivials of destiny
Echo of thy voice answered abruptly,
denied all the time we were swimming'in merrily,
Explicitly,nothing come hither any longer,
Permanently,I've been engrossed in thy eclipsed tender.



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