[問題] 關於推薦信翻譯

[doways (絕對零度的相遇)]

what is your estimation of the applicant's principal strengths as they bear on
participation in a master of buiness administratioin program

你認為申請者可以影響申請進入商學院的主要優勢是啥?

我覺得有點饒舌!!

Do you consider the applicant’s achievements thus far to be a true
indication of his/her ability? ____________________________

你認為申請者的到目前為止的成就或表現，是否合乎他的能力??


In your opinion, has this applicant given careful and realistic thought to
his/her commitment to graduate study in business, as well
as to subsequent career goals?

申請者是否對於唸商學院以及他接下來的未來有仔細的考慮??


小弟要翻給主管寫推薦信~~

請大大看一下這樣的譯文是否有太大的問題~~

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推 TheRock:「啥」這種字出現在這類翻譯上不合適吧？
推 crossif:改成"為何"或許比較好^^.