[閒聊]研究生寫的自我介紹

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話說某位研究生正十萬火急地四處尋找指導教授

而其中一位教授要求他要先寫英文自介

而這位研究生自己寫了　然後又來問我朋友　我朋友又來問我



一看　真是令我大搖其頭

文法字彙有錯在所難免　

可是裏面邏輯不通之處　跟行文語氣間不負責任的態度

實在是看不下去（大家應該能夠體會我在說什麼吧）

以下為原稿：

Although I've pass the entrance exam of NTU, but I still not get enough
information about what I will be interested in the future, so I hope after
the conversation, I can know more about professor's major research areas.



我想了想，又問了我朋友這位天兵研究生是什麼狀況，然後幫他改成：

I was very lucky to pass the entrance exam and got admitted to National
Taiwan University. As a graduate student, I need to find an advisor who can
offer me professional advices in terms of my future research. I have talked
to some upperclassmates and heard about you. I am very interested in your
area and I believe that I will learn the most from you. Therefore, I humbly
ask for a chance to speak with you in order to find out more details and
discuss our future research.

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推 sixfeetunder:這裡指的advice應該不能加s吧?
推 sixfeetunder:and i believe that的and前面是不是該加,呢?
推 tengharold:教授應該一看就知道這不是本人寫的吧...
→ tengharold:且six大大似乎說的沒錯，但文筆比原稿好太多了
→ tengharold:可能area of research/research area會比純area好
推 hefogott:老實說我會比較喜歡原稿  因為簡單直接
→ hefogott:英文是要改一下  但是內容夠真誠
推 hefogott:教授們一年到晚都收到"I am honored to..."之類的客套話
→ hefogott:偶爾收一些簡單直接的也不錯 ^^  這是我個人廢言
推 hefogott:最後還是一句 辛苦了原Po~  你是好人 (逃)
推 tengharold:改的太好，教授看見本人英文程度會不會失望?
推 FlyinDeath:research換成domain會不會更順？
→ FlyinDeath:講錯  area換成domain會不會更順？