Re: [問題] 請幫我潤飾一下^^"

[lifegetter (蛋伯)]

※ 引述《peterchang32 ()》之銘言：

: 原文
Combined with [contemporary elements of arches, wrought-iron & terracotta
tiles with light, airy colours, good quality fabrics & subtle lighting,]
offering guests a [totally unique atmosphere not featured elsewhere in
Tropical North Queensland].

Combined with contemporary elements of
  1. arches
  2. wrought-iron &
     terracotta tiles [that have]
        light, airy colours                   [輕逸飄緻的色彩]
  3. good quality fabrics &
     subtle lighting                          [幽淡閒適的光影]

offering guests an atomosphere [that are]
   total unique [and]
   not featured elsewhere in TNQ

降子該好翻多了。

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※ 編輯: lifegetter      來自: 210.240.238.219      (09/25 16:17)
※ 編輯: lifegetter      來自: 210.240.238.219      (09/25 17:42)
※ 編輯: lifegetter      來自: 210.240.238.219      (09/25 17:43)
推 toofat:我覺得這邊的good quality fabrics是接在tile的with後面而
→ toofat:不是combined with的受詞　所以是形容tile，為什麼terra-
→ toofat:cotta　tile要這麼麻煩的修飾呢？因為紅土瓦材質本身並非是
→ toofat:現代建築元素，必須是色調沒有那麼紅、顏色淡一些看起來活
→ toofat:潑而不陳舊，材質更提升的現代磚瓦材料，才符合現代元素
→ toofat:看了上下文我覺得fabrics不是指紡織品，而是structure
→ toofat:在韋伯字典fabric的做紡織品解已經是第三順位了...除非
推 hanway:樓上的意思是fabrics和lighting都是形容tiles的？
→ toofat:寫成textile and fabric則一定解成紡織品　不然都不一定
→ toofat:lighting在＆後面　是combined with的受詞之ㄧ
推 hanway:那lighting呢？
推 lifegetter:打燈光，光影。