[高中] 文法-as的用法

[sweetbubble (甜泡泡)]

下面這個錯誤的句子:
A promising baseball player as he is,
Chien-Ming Wang is never too proud of himself.

若改成以下這樣即為正確，as在這裡是though的意思
Promising baseball player as he is,
Chien-Ming Wang is never too proud of himself.

想請教大家，若寫成
1. A promising baseball player as he,
Chien-Ming Wang is never too proud of himself.

2. Promising as he is a baseball player,
Chien-Ming Wang is never too proud of himself.

這樣的句構是正確還是錯誤的呢？


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推 darn:1.沒有動詞 2.會變成promising形容he's a baseball player這
→ darn:件事 而非he is a "promising baseball player"
推 zofloya:我一直覺得，為什麼台灣學英文的學生那麼重視句子的結構，
→ zofloya:高中生來講，文章、句子或單字的意思應該才是重心吧~
→ zofloya:這裡即使句構對，我覺得意思也變了，整個焦點也不見了~
推 onevoice:有的高中段考必考判別句構的題目 即使知道學英文重點
→ onevoice:似乎不該只是這樣 但句構搞不清楚題目就不會寫~
→ onevoice:實在是很沒有辦法的事情哪~
推 Dramaman:如果連句子結構都沒搞懂 意思也很難傳達出來吧
推 rich09piper:解題語意是王道啊!其實這種倒裝在現代英文中已經不常
推 outofdejavu:                 Nonsense <= ￣￣￣￣￣￣￣￣￣￣
推 rich09piper:學生連一般的句子都寫不好了，還搞倒裝，本末倒置。
→ rich09piper:你大可以去看NY TIMES 等prestigious paper看誰是
推 rich09piper:在nonsense.我看就是有你這種老師愛賣弄語法。當你學
→ rich09piper:生真是"awesome!"
推 zofloya:倒裝句沒有不常見，只是高中生對倒裝句讚牛角尖沒必要而已
→ zofloya:nonsense話是重了一點，不過基本的倒裝句我覺得還是要會~