推 mingtai1:感恩!! 突然覺得後面句子太長,都沒有斷句 Orz 11/01 03:28
推 dexmanlau:請問倒數第2行有沒有加逗點差在哪? 11/01 09:18
推 chileno:查了一下字典...好像都可以XD 11/01 12:52
※ 引述《mingtai1 (snake)》之銘言：
: I have been working in an academic institute since my graduation
: two years ago. I majored in computer science, and sometimes I write
: applications according to customers' demands. During these days,
: I realized that a person should not have only one skill, and I realized
: the fact that programming cannot be a forever career for me, so I learned
1.兩個"I realized"重複了，可以省掉一個，
後面一句直接用"and that"，連the fact都可以不用。
2.forever好像太強了，long-term、lifelong、long-lasting如何？
: English a lot and took TOEIC exam and hope I would be able to work in
^^^這裡改用逗點 ^^這裡加逗點。
: foreign companies for my next job and hopefully I can have the opportunities
^^^^去掉這個and另起一句
: to work abroad for my company so that I can visit scenic spots
^^要加逗點
: around the world.
請參考:)
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