推 jennyQ:Thanks a lot^^ 02/07 14:17
Some suggestion.
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: The main reasons for people to attend college is to gain professional
: knowledge and skills. Besides, going to college may also improve one's
their
it's corresponding to people
: social ability and cultivate one's independence, since most of the college
their
: students live far from their hometown. My personal experience and actual
: observations have led me to say so.
observation
I think the two words should be both sigular or plural, and I think
the sugular ones are better here.
: I have just graduated from university. Things what I have learned
X
: there were not just all about my major, though it's also important to study
X
: those subjects. My major is Pharmacy, which is difficult and consumes time
: very much. I had to study hard, take much time discussing homework with my
and spend
: classmates, and search the internet or look up papers in the library to solve
X searching the Internet and reading papers....
: problems. By teamwork, it saved me lots of time; furthermore, I learned more
put this phrase after "time"
: about cooperation with others.
: The university which I studied is far from my hometown. It was the very
in was
: first time for me to leave my parents. Everything I need all have to be
X
: prepared by myself, such as commodities, finding house to rent, and financial
: management. Those things were not easy to me at first, so I had to be strong
for
: and learn to be independent. This really helps me grow up.
helped
: Reasons for people to attend college are well documented, and the reasons
interpreted X
: for me are that I can obtain not just powerful professional knowledge but social
is only
: skills and personal independence. My college life did cultivate me into a
: mature and professional one.
person
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