Re: [討論] 魔王勇者ED魔文英文版翻譯

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標題Re: [討論] 魔王勇者ED魔文英文版翻譯

時間Sat Jan 12 22:23:29 2013

我也對照了一下ED的魔文發現有幾個原PO看(打)錯的地方另外原PO看不清楚的字我也全數搞定搞得我現在居然看得懂魔文了囧首先，通篇魔文中有幾個字是魔文本來就寫錯的標題的trou"v"adour (troubadour, 吟遊詩人) 倒數第二段的b"i"hind (behind, 在...之後) 最後一段的swa"n"ping (swamp, 陷入) 我一直在想故意寫錯這些字是否有特殊意義但是當我把這些錯字用日本人的英文發音法念一次之後神奇的事情發生了這些錯字念起來跟正確的字一樣!!! 究竟是我腦補，還是純粹是個巧合就留給大家判斷吧，反正我是信了! 以下非專業翻譯，歡迎討論指正 The obscure troubadour's song 無名吟遊詩人之歌 There met the demon queen and the brave Then got together for the story to weave To break the fate of the war between them To bring them a sight of the far of the hill 魔王與勇者相遇他們攜手共同編織了一段故事為了打破彼此爭鬥的命運為了一望彼方山丘之景色 In human's world, at a small village They settled hiding their own origins Growing potatoes to feed those starving They got good friends hip with the villagers Poor sisters became their waiting maids Children were pupils for them to teach What they began was reform of the earth Modest, steady but growing certainly It even regained the tie between the mates That the brave lost in his sorrow full days 在人類世界的一個小村落他們定居下來並隱姓埋名種植馬鈴薯以供養飽受飢餓之人他們獲得村民友善的讚揚可憐的姊妹成為他們的侍奉女僕小孩們如同學徒等待他們的教導他們從土地的改良開始些許地、穩定地、但確切成長著甚至讓勇者取回了在過往的哀傷中失去的夥伴羈絆 They hid themselves and there came the peace Yet everyone knew it was just a moment Bunch of potatoes from a small village Eased people's hunger and disturbed people's mind 他們隱藏自我而迎來和平然而眾所皆知這只是暫時大量的馬鈴薯來自一座小村莊紓解了人民的飢餓也使得人民困惑 Those who sell things and those who buy things Those who reign and those under the reign Centrals were abundant Southerns were deficient Centrals would keep supreme over southerns Demons were still menace, humans raised their struggle Things were hardly to turn out as they wanted 那些購買之人與那些販賣之人那些統治之人與那些被統治之人中央物產豐隆南方物資貧乏中央想保持其優越於南方之地位魔族威脅依舊，人類奮勇抵抗事態難以轉向他們所望 Their little maid, who had been a poor serf Shouted her mind that she did be human Her brief words shook things up over the world Southerns allied themselves stood against Centrals 他們的小女僕，曾為可憐的農奴呼喊出自己身為人類的心聲他短暫的言語顛覆了世界南方聯合了起來對抗中央 The only thing to do was to be obedient The only thing right was what the Church told The only worth of one coin was as one gold coin The only enemy was Demons People united to resist when the plague got to rage in this world The only thing they could do was pray for relief 唯一該做的事是服從唯一正確的事是教會旨意一枚硬幣唯一的價值正是它是一枚金幣唯一的敵人是魔族人們團結起來抵抗瘟疫席捲這個世界他們唯一能做的事是祈求寬慰 The Demon Queen and the Brave joined their hands What a thorny path that they were treading Their torch lit their way, unhinged the world Ignited the conflicts between humans The Church pronounced anathema upon Southerns Centrals declared war against Southerns The schism divided the church into two Wheat price went up, gold lost its worth Serfs were headed to South for freedom Hunger were fed by the heathen crops 魔王與勇者加入他們的行列這是一條充滿荊棘的道路他們的火炬點亮了路途，動搖了世界點燃了人類之間的衝突教會宣布南方為可憎之徒中央向南方宣戰分裂使得教會一分為二小麥價格飆漲，金幣喪失其價農奴前往南方尋求自由飢餓被異教徒的作物給緩解 Behind the wars between humans and humans There appeared the new contacts with Demons Southerns obtained the medicine from Demons The Holy Kingdom signed the secret treaty With Glaucides, the demons they would abolish The Salamender Princess wanted the salt trades 在人類的戰爭背後出現了與魔族的接觸南方從魔族取得了藥物神聖王國與他們想消滅的蒼魔族簽訂了秘密條約火龍公主尋求鹽的交易 During absence of the Demon Queen and the Brave There were scrambling for the humans world They were pupils and the clan of the queen In the great flow swamping the entire world The queen stood before the whole Demons To assemble the congress of all Demon tribes 在魔王與勇者缺席的期間發生了人界的爭奪他們是與魔王同為一族之人在整個世界陷入巨大的洪流之時魔王挺身立於魔族之前為了成立代表魔族一族的議會最後我要來吐槽一下... http://i.imgur.com/h6Mwr.jpg 字寫在邊框裡面是哪招啦!! S那個原PO有看出來我超佩服 D那個字我一直想很久，因為沒這個字後來才發現前面多加一個D就符合文意了根本視力測驗 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 1.172.99.241

推 SaberTheBest:推 01/12 22:26

推 daniel7894:c洽一堆符號&文字學點滿的強者... 01/12 22:27

推 SaberTheBest:Glaucides 蒼魔族? 01/12 22:29

→ sannosekai:我也有想過這是唯一符合藍青色開頭的東西 01/12 22:30

→ sannosekai:不過不確定就是了 01/12 22:30

→ SaberTheBest:glaucides land 蒼魔之地 01/12 22:30

→ SaberTheBest:剛Gooogle了一下那句應該是 01/12 22:31

→ SaberTheBest:...signed the secret treaty With Glaucides 01/12 22:32

→ SaberTheBest:所以是神聖王國和他們要消滅的蒼魔族簽約 01/12 22:33

→ SaberTheBest:http://tinyurl.com/aa46nwu 這裡有英翻日的版本 01/12 22:34

推 q0r0p:王國取得蒼魔之約後人類與魔族的界限將模糊 01/12 22:35

→ sannosekai:但是With有大寫所以我想斷句應該是在treaty 01/12 22:35

→ sannosekai:不過你這樣解釋之後感覺比較對... 01/12 22:35

→ q0r0p:應該是說人類與魔族本來互相戰爭之後變成兩派聯盟戰爭 01/12 22:36

→ sannosekai:OK 感謝指正 01/12 22:37

※ 編輯: sannosekai 來自: 1.172.99.241 (01/12 22:39)

推 sayuki:www 01/12 22:37

推 kawo:變成人類魔族裡的「維新派」與「保守派」的戰爭 01/12 22:37

推 SaberTheBest:再推一次辛苦了@@/ 01/12 22:40

推 BruceShaou:賀!!原po成為魔族 01/12 22:47

推 Enter1942:神人啊...真的太強了 01/12 22:54

→ etderain2002:因為只有你看這麼清楚啊XDDDDDDDDDDDD 01/12 22:56

推 tsubasawolfy:我最賭爛的是畫裡的文字根本要一個個試Orz 01/12 23:05

推 CP64:怎麼有人會去解讀那些字..天啊... 01/12 23:14

推 talesr:與其如此還不如說"製作組怎麼會作出這些東西...天啊..." 01/12 23:15

推 ShinonoHouki:感謝翻譯！這好棒呀！---- 01/12 23:23

推 ysanderl:無論是製作組還是翻譯的原PO都太強了 XDD 01/12 23:36

推 ts01670634:http://i.imgur.com/LIFOW.jpg 01/12 23:59

推 mackywei:原來是標題不一樣.... 01/13 00:23

推 Galm:佩服... 01/13 00:39

推 hirokofan:有神快拜 01/13 09:21

推 Syoshinsya:是神阿 (拜 01/13 10:30

推 Quietlake:大推 01/13 13:05

推 ssk1025:請受在下一拜 01/13 16:11

推 wht810090:原po請受我一拜，太強了...這樣也等於是把接下來的劇情 01/16 01:45

→ wht810090:捏光光了www 01/16 01:45

推 yes78529:神 01/16 11:58