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※ 引述《mikewinny (怎麼戀愛？ )》之銘言：
: ● Introduction
: 書法是漢文化圈特有的藝術，長久以來在中國文化傳統中蔚成體系，也自然應用在日常生
: 活裏，了無古今的隔閡。有關中國書法從古到今發展的歷程，始終是大家關心的課題，本
: 項展覽即由此出發，揭示其間發展的脈絡。
: To meet the need for recording information and ideas, unique expressions and
: forms of calligraphy--the art of writing--developed over the ages in the
: tradition of Chinese culture. This art naturally became a part of daily life,
: forming a continuous link between past and present. The history of Chinese
: calligraphy has long been a subject of interest. This exhibition includes
: selections of the five major script types (seal, clerical, cursive, running,
: and standard) from the Museum collection arranged in chronological order for
: an overview of this art form.
沒什麼時間看完，只看到第一段 XD
給點小建議
經驗上，給演講的時候最好多用平易單字，尤其是演講的開頭
假如出現生冷的單字，可能會讓人一開始就對演講心生畏懼，後面就聽不下去
像是chronological這種字最好避免，假如用time ordered就比較平易
即是是對外國人也是，一個親切的演講往往比較容易理解
另外就是內容盡量口語化
這段文章的原文就已經是很不口語的了，寫成文章雖然比較典雅
但是想像人家降子跟你講話就會很奇怪，你絕對不會希望有人降子跟你講話
"長久以來在中國文化傳統中蔚成體系"
變成"forming a continuous link between past and present"還是一樣怪
這部分可能Winny需要花一點心思
btw,就文字稿來說，這樣真寫的是挺不錯的~
還有提醒一下英文演講最怕的就是聽不懂問題或是聽懂了問題但是不知道怎麼回答
因為講是有準備的，但是回答都是沒準備的，所以回答比較可能卡掉
能找個不懂書法但是英文還可的人去亂問問題試試看會有幫助
: 1. seal: (n) 篆
: 2. clerical: (n) 隸
: 3. cursive: (n) 草書
: 4. running: (n) 狂草
: 5. standard: (n) 楷書
: 6. chronological: (a) 時間排序的
: 一、 字體初步辨認：篆、隸、楷、行(含線質好壞及中文字義)(各字體的關聯性)
: First of all, we want to introduce what's different and relevant between the
: Seal, Clerical, cursive, running and standard.
: 二、 楷、行書的藝術假設：動勢與用筆初階(一筆成形的美學觀點)
: In the trend towards abbreviation and brevity in writing(由於時代潮流趨向簡便
: 快捷), clerical script continued to evolve and eventually led to the forms of
: cursive, running, and standard script. Now we will teach you how to write
: the form of standard and cursive.
: 1. abbreviating: (v) 縮寫
: 2. brevity: (n) 短暫
: 三、楷行書的美學表現(Power Point & sory 揮毫示範) －The form of standard
: 1. 簡介：承續動勢主題 (The movement is in the form of standard)
: 2. 蘭亭集序：悠閒 (These form will make us feel very free)
: 3. 張猛龍碑：方折 (These form will present the angle very obviously)
: 4. 鄭文公：渾厚 (These form will present the words very natural and
: powerful)
: 5. 黃庭堅的開張（樣式）
: 6. 九成宮、孔子廟堂的差別
: 四、實習
: 1.創作作品(濃淡乾溼)
: 2.王羲之快雪時晴帖題拔解說(含圖)
: 3.手卷（平安....視狀況）
: 4.對聯、名字、春聯
: When we are writing, the ink has played an important role for our work. Such
: as, if there isn't enough ink (add too much water into the ink), the word
: will become liveless (without energy and powerful); however, there is too
: much ink, the words will seem too heavy.
: 五、備案
: 1.平安
: 2.春字
: 3.硬筆書法
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