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※ 引述《Todesengel (如歌的行板)》之銘言: : ※ 引述《kuwawa (Quesder)》之銘言: : : GRE Isssue第185題, 問到Scandal對社會的影響, 是否能引起人人們對 : 我直覺不會把這個事件歸類到醜聞耶。 : 若你要說邱小妹妹的事件是醜聞, : 那只有一個方向比較有可能(也比較明確): : 你認為醫生是錯的,而且建立在你覺得當今醫療體系沒有什麼重大缺失的背景下, : 並且是他明知事態嚴重,故意不收人。 : 也就是你認為醫生的操守是有問題的, : 他的這種個人行為才比較像 scandal。 對不起, 那如果寫成這樣, 有scandal的味道嗎? 如果沒有, 只好另找別的事件了 (泣~) In my country, once a doctor in the emergency room of a municipal hospital rejected a heavily-wound child because he did not want to account for the result of the surgical operation. He excused the rejection by saying that there were no beds in the hospital then, but he did not check it in fact. Finally, the child was sent to a hospital 150 km away because other neighboring hospitals also said they had no beds. Finally, the child died several days later because the operation was too late and had little effect. When this scandal surfaced, the society got fury. All the relative doctors were castigated and people demanded a reinspection of the entire medical system. Now doctors become more responsible and people get better quality of medical service. Apparently, no speakers or reformers could achieve a reform in such efficiency. 基本上水門案已經被範文寫過了, 再寫恐怕會被視為抄襲. : 不過我們的醫療體系的確有些問題, : 而且你又不能確定醫生完完全全是錯的, : 所以我覺得不太可能成立,你這樣寫容易離題與無法掌握重點。 : 像是醫生收紅包之類的事就可以是 scandal, : 相關的社會問題也很好寫。 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 210.85.117.41