作者look25 (隨風漂...  )
看板Eng-Class
標題[文法] 幫忙訂正一下
時間Thu May 19 00:41:40 2005
If our government strictly to put the laws into effect, I think that
social problems, which was caused by online games will great reduce.
Meanwhile, playing online games will become the best entertainment in our life.
高手 幫我看一下 有沒有錯誤
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