Re: [文法] 有無需要修改的?

[solarjeff (吉祥如意)]

※ 引述《lovesafin (作自己)》之銘言：
:   老師要我們把我們過去一年的寫作，把有需要訂正的地方修改好。
:   然後做成網站 這是我自己寫的結論，麻煩大家幫我看看有沒有需要修改的!!

:   Writing is very difficult for us. We always write Chinese English and

It is very hard for me to write an article in English.
I often write an English sentence by using Chinese grammer , therefore,
the grammer errors of the sentences never stop visiting me.

:   make mistakes about the grammar.Maybe it’s we don’t know plenty of the
:   words and phrases. But we think we have a great improvement in writing
:   during the past year. We learned writing skills、a complaint letter、
:   conjunctions and so on.

It's all because of the absence of vocabularies and phrases.
I believe that I have a great improvement in my writing skill over the
past year after learning so many writing skills, such as a complaint letter、
the usage of conjunctions(連接詞?).


:   During the past year, when we have an assignment, we always want to do
:   our best to finish the work perfectly. However, we still have many errors
:   in the articles. Writing the weekly journal is useful for us.

During last year, I'd been always wanted to do my best to finish the work
perfectly when I had recieved an assignment. However, there're still
many errors that could be found in my English articles. It's very useful for
me to write the weekly journal.


:   Every week we have a journal and we have to discuss with our partner or
:   do it by ourselves. That is a good idea, which can fire up the imagination
:   of us.

I had to discuss my weekly journal with my partner or did it on my own (自己
跟自己討論?@@?)
That ( To discuss with our partner or..) is a good idea. The imagination of us
were all inspired.


:  Our writing ability is still not good enough but we will keep doing it
:  until we can write the article correctly.

The ability of my writing skills is still not good enough but I will keep
working on it until I can write an article smoothly.


:   麻煩各位~~謝謝


有太多怪怪的地方了, @@!!
因為無聊,所以照原意改寫了一次
(若照原文改,我可能不知從何下手,所以才藉由改寫來比較差異的地方,請包涵^^" )

原po應該可以比較看看其中用字的差別
雖然我的英文寫作能力應該還算普通~

剩下錯誤的地方就有請版上大大幫忙修改了~

^^

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推 flandre:我覺得第二段的absence換成insufficiency (不足,
→ flandre:不夠多的字詞彙) 好像比較好
推 solarjeff:^^ thx~dude!