[文法] 有無需要修改的?

[lovesafin (作自己)]

  老師要我們把我們過去一年的寫作，把有需要訂正的地方修改好。
  然後做成網站 這是我自己寫的結論，麻煩大家幫我看看有沒有需要修改的!!

  Writing is very difficult for us. We always write Chinese English and
  make mistakes about the grammar.Maybe it’s we don’t know plenty of the
  words and phrases. But we think we have a great improvement in writing
  during the past year. We learned writing skills、a complaint letter、
  conjunctions and so on.

  During the past year, when we have an assignment, we always want to do
  our best to finish the work perfectly. However, we still have many errors
  in the articles. Writing the weekly journal is useful for us.
  Every week we have a journal and we have to discuss with our partner or
  do it by ourselves. That is a good idea, which can fire up the imagination
  of us.

 Our writing ability is still not good enough but we will keep doing it
 until we can write the article correctly.

  麻煩各位~~謝謝

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推 ycjjen: 寫得很好啊! 如果我有空可以幫你修改幾個小地方
→ ycjjen: so stay tuned! ^^