作者JOY0968 (朋友~~順阿!!)
看板Eng-Class
標題[文法] 可以請大家看一下這篇簡單的文章嗎
時間Sun Dec 11 22:21:56 2005
室友他明天要上台的演說 我們有看過改過了
只是想請大家看看還有有沒有什麼我們沒注意到文法 或錯誤的地方
有點急...
謝謝^^
Hello, every one, my name is Eva.Today I want to talk about my hobbies .
I like surfing Internate and using MSN to chat with my friend.
I love using computer because I can get many information what I want,
and when I am boried,I can play games in computer.
I like using computer to talk with my friends because it is very convenient and immediately,
the most important is it's free,doesn't like telephone.
So when I am home I use my computer more than watch tv.
My other hobby is listening music,because I love singing very much,
and when I fell depressed,listening music can make me to be in a good mood.
I like to sing with the song,but now I live with my friends so i can't do it when my friend at home,or they will feel clamorousely.
Ok,that's about my hobbies.My speech is over, thank you!
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