[語文] GWD TN23 Q2

[cindycat1210 (back from denmark)]

Q2: PP48.
Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal
point of urban life, the river in San Antonio winds through the middle of
the business district, and the River Walk, or Pasco del Rio, is the city's
most popular attraction.

A.      Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the
focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio
B.      Unlike the river in many cities in the United Stated, which is no
longer the local point of urban life, in San Antonio the river
C.      Today the river in many cities in the United States is no longer the
focal point of urban life, unlike San Antonio, where it
D.      In few United States cities today, a river is the focal point of
urban life, but the river in San Antonio
E.      No longer do many cities in United States have a river as the focal
point of urban life, but in San Antonio the river

有人可以解釋一下為啥答案是E嗎? 大感謝

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→ outofdejavu:A 不妥在於Unlike many US cities => 城市
→ outofdejavu:  但主要子句主詞是the river，比較對象的概念不同
→ outofdejavu:B 不妥在於 which 指涉對象不明，因為有可能是river或
→ outofdejavu:  US
→ outofdejavu:D 不妥在於a river 那句會誤導
→ outofdejavu:C 不妥在於it, 在San Antonio的河跟美國其他城市的河
→ outofdejavu:  不見得是同一條
→ outofdejavu:以上拙見
→ PINKENVI:我說說C吧!C應該是unlike不能放在句子中!然後San Antonio
→ PINKENVI:和RIVER無法相比!
→ outofdejavu:我想你是說子句