作者bingciate (兵燹)
看板silversoul
標題Re: [攘夷] 我的英文作文
時間Mon Aug 4 12:48:22 2008
※ 引述《fishko1123 (黑鋼之鍊金術師)》之銘言：
: 啊啊，寫作文好麻煩，尤其是英文...百目鬼副長你說呢?(誤)
: 以下是全文(註:小孩子當然是寫小孩子作文，但我內心真的是大叔)
: My Pet
: I have a pet. It's a secret creature. Its name is Elizabeth. We got it
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改成I吧
: when we took the trip to Japan last summer vacation. Elizabeth owner before,
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改成I會比較通順,文章中we不知道指涉誰,所以改成I比較清楚
Elizabeth owner before改成Elizabeth's ex-owner會比較好懂
: Mr.Zura,told me seriously that I have to take good care of it.
: .
: It looks like a duck but its legs looks like human's. It also has hair on
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look
: its legs! It can't have voice but it can write what it thought on a white board
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改成thinks符合時態
: in Japanese. I have to improve my Japanese for talking with it fluently. It is
: a vegetarian. The drink it likes the best is vegetable juice.
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改成Vegetable juice is it's favorite dink.比較好懂也比較簡潔
: It is cute and also smart. I love it as my friend.
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文法上是沒錯,但改成It is not only cute but also smart.會好一點
或是直接用It is cute and smart.也很好
: 排版有點混亂，請加減看(跪)
: 大叔話翻譯版等我上完英文課會回來補充(被桂毆)
: 還有請不要把伊麗莎白當寵物看待，本篇是偷懶的錯誤示範
以上大叔閒閒沒事幹做的一些修改
沒有什麼冒犯的意思請見諒
因為我不想因此而被副長下令切腹...
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推 j022015:大叔惜大叔 推一個.... 08/04 12:56
推 b92520142:Oh, you can speak English very well !! 08/04 13:01
→ SmallLong:Very funny, Peter. 08/04 13:08
推 ihanchen:大叔的教育不能等... 08/04 13:20
推 ihanchen:看到b大改的ex-owner怎麼我看的時候一直帶入ex-boyfriend 08/04 13:27
推 mayloveonly:secret會不會改成mysterious比較好 08/04 15:09
推 LoveBea:PUSH 08/04 15:53
推 dogman0381:小訂正一下:Vegetable juice is "its" favorite dink. 08/04 19:44
推 sayin:應該是翻譯成 你看jacky的鼻子好大吧 08/04 21:46
推 EeLong:為什麼是"jacky的鼻子"!! (大驚) 08/04 23:22
→ fishko1123:謝謝這篇m(_._)M 08/06 08:31
推 fishko1123:感謝這篇和樓上各位大叔，翻譯就"伊莉莎白很可愛對吧?" 08/06 11:43
→ ihanchen:翻譯：出包王女超有趣 08/06 12:06