[創作] 生涯第一首完整的歌

[jnco ( It's the Unit!)]

http://0rz.net/781zp

其實這首歌是兩個月前參加嘻哈社的 one shot 比賽創作的
不過最後還是被慘墊 囧rz

beats 是用 E-Jay 自己作的
歌詞是用英文寫的, 因為中文的rap還停留在數來寶階段
本來有跟朋友一起合唱 不過那個版本還沒有錄好
今天突然心血來潮想說就先放 solo 的部份上來給大家幹譙一下吧 哈哈
順便徵求一下有興趣的熱血青年
一起來玩一下唄!

歌詞:

What You Want

(Hook)
Tell me what you want from me?
Big Car? Big House? Big Jewelry?
Tell me what you want you from me?
Fendi? Louis Vuitton? Gucci or Diamond Ring?
Tell me what you want you from me?

[jnco]

Listen, I wrote this song,
Try to remind myself that I won’t go wrong,
Everybody has a dream,
Like Tom Hanks in Cast Away, man, you gotta swim,
They call me Mr. Cocky, but don’t get it twisted,
I got everything you want like you see in super market,
A perfect gentleman, Prof. Dope,
Welcome to my class and welcome to the show,
Lesson One, you'd better be aware,
Catch every chance and get your ass prepared,
This is the first thing imma let you know,
Cuz today is yesterday’s tomorrow,
Life is like a road trip, so where’d you go?
Power? Fame? Fortune? Or searching for your soul?
Knowledge is power, Faithful for the fame,
Love can be your fortune, Worthy is your name.

(Hook)

[jnco]

Friday night we used to have a party,
Got chicks all around and we gon sip Bacardi,
See money ain't a thang, nah, but it ain't right,
My self conscious wake up, we got a fight,
Mannifact, I got this message from above,
God be my shield, man, you can’t touch us,
It is what it is, you'd better accept that,
Drop your shit, homie, Hello welcome back,
This world is fucked up, people go kamikaze,
If you lose your faith, you do the same exactly,
My favor rapper used to sing “Carpe Diem”,
Favor player say “Hate that, cuz I am a champion”,
Life is all about getting A’s,
You find something you want, you’d better chase,
So don’t be scared don’t be afraid of failure,
We the best now, let’s get this cheddar.



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