→ joggychu:讓人一目了然的詩真好^^ 很能感同身受 :) 推 140.112.7.59 03/18
→ sharay:末句一定可以更順... 推 61.64.150.144 03/19
→ sharay:你偶遇了什麼呀... 推 61.64.150.144 03/19
→ yas875:考試加油～ 推140.112.248.135 03/19
→ joggychu:我卻覺得末句意境不錯耶 :p 推 140.112.86.84 03/19
→ sharay:意境好 但覺得跟前三句比拗口了一些些些些 推 61.64.101.60 03/20
→ singingwind:好有感觸的一首詩啊 推 12.221.72.28 03/20
→ seko:推推推～～～ *^^* 推 210.66.83.78 03/21
→ nihcay:第一句改成"而今只道是平常"如何? 推 140.112.220.61 03/23
→ heki:原作較優,也較"不平常".^^ 推 140.112.25.147 03/23
→ nihcay:嗯...我只覺得不似平常的通順 推 140.112.141.39 03/23
→ sharay:受教了... 我誤導了kiky530 推 61.64.100.211 03/23
→ sharay:可能530原來的"如今"好些... 推 61.64.100.211 03/23