[轉錄]Re: [吐司] C2speech-Oops I Did It Again

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標題: Re: [吐司] C2speech-Oops I Did It Again
時間: Sun Mar 22 09:43:01 2009

作者: bestken77 (錚綠去冰) 看板: survivor
標題: Re: [吐司] C2speech-Oops I Did It Again
時間: Sat Mar 21 19:44:40 2009


以下是Ken Wang就甘心的 Evaluation ：


Evaluation for Ken Huang’s C2 speech

At first, I was attracted by your speech title! A good speech title will make
others wonder what you're going to say. They will expect your speech and  it's
a kind of promotion(since I the PRVP XD). I will divide it into several parts
as the following:

Advantages:

1.Facial expression: since you're a funny person, it’s very easy for you to
                     do it well.

2.Smile:always on your face!! When you talk about me, all of the members wear
        smile on their face= =

3.Context: close to the speech title, it would be better if it's your C1
           speech.

4.Specialty:costantly interacting with the audience, especially put me fully
            in your speech.

5.No nervousness: I believe you practice it many times. I can see your
                  confidence from your C2 speech.

Room for improvements:

1.Eye contact: Today, our audience was divided into three parts, right,
               middle and left. If you see in their eyes for a while, they will
               feel that you're talking to them individually.(It can show your
               confidence as well!)

2.Voice: Because I can't hear clearly in the back of the classroom, I think
         you can make your voice louder.

3.Stance: Only one position. It would be better for you to move closer to me
          while talking about me. And you can stand closer to the audience as
          well.

4.Speed: Nervousness makes you increase your speed, maybe some pause, vocal
         variety would be better.

5.Pronunciation(咬字): clearer pronunciation can enhance your speech value.
                       Maybe listen to CNN radio to learn the pronunciation.


I'm looking forward to your C3 speech, we can see a great progress in your
speech.You encourage me to get my C3 speech well-prepared, thanks^^”
Last but not least, it costs $1,000 to call my name from now on.XD

Ken Wang

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