[翻譯] Pain of Salvation - Remedy Lane ７ - 精華區 RockMetal

作者coolfly (如腐敗入骨，如身居火宅)

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標題[翻譯] Pain of Salvation - Remedy Lane ７

時間Mon Apr 27 11:43:19 2009

7. Rope Ends 繩結注 Pain of Salvation [注] rope end即繩索的末端，但在這段歌詞中似乎有隱喻繩索兩端所打成的繩結之意，故姑譯為「繩結」。 She is still young... 她年紀尚輕…… Another day of emptiness This life is wearing her down The room around her is a mess Her children safe with her mom 又是空虛度日這種生活不斷消磨她她身遭的房間一團混亂孩子們安然跟外婆在一起 She is still young but feeling old Two children with different fathers She sits on the bathroom floor alone The shower chain broke Her neck hurts 她還年輕，但內心已老兩個孩子各有不同的爹她獨自坐在浴室地板上蓮蓬水管斷裂劃傷她的頸部 Then another night of emptiness to wear her down Naked to the world she wraps her sadness in a gown Her children fast asleep she sears the dark with glassy eyes Choosing carefully among her husband’s business ties 然後又是令她備感疲弱的一個空虛夜晚赤裸面對世界，她將自己的憂傷包裹在一件睡袍中孩子很快就睡著了，她無神的雙眼洞視黑暗慎重地在丈夫上班的領帶之中挑選 “Over!” she cries through rope ends and silk ties Beautiful life escaping her young blue eyes But life holds her hand, refusing to let go Leaving her breathing on the floor 「結束吧！」透過繩結和絲質領帶，她哭說美麗的生命自她年輕的碧眼中逸去但生命掌握了她的手，拒絕撒手而逝將她的氣息留在了地面 They’re still asleep don’t hear her cry And she’s still obsessed with rope ends This time she picks a stronger tie With Winnie the Pooh and friends 其他人仍在睡夢中，沒聽到她的哭聲她依然著迷於繩結，一心求死這次她挑了條比較強韌的領帶上面有小熊維尼和牠的朋友們 She is still young but feeling old A child dying to be a mother Now she hangs from the ceiling all alone All pressure is falling from her 她年紀尚輕，但彷彿卻已蒼老成為人母扼殺了她的青春現在她孤單地掛在天花板上所有的壓力都從身上墜落 Seeing guilt has taught her guilt she’s raised on disbelief Merely twenty beautiful but with a taste for grief She has learnt all that there is to know about hopelessness Seeing that no effort in this world can stand her test 明白罪惡感只會教她更感內疚，她變得質疑一切雙十年華，美麗動人，但內心充滿悲慘早就遍嚐無助滋味明白這世上沒有任何努力能幫她撐過這試煉 “Over!” she cries through rope ends and silk ties Beautiful life escaping her young blue eyes And Winnie is strong, would never let her fall Prevents her from breathing till she’s not there at all But life holds her hands, refusing to let go Leaving her breathing on the floor 「結束吧！」透過繩結和絲質領帶，她哭說美麗的生命自她年輕的碧眼中逸去小熊維尼夠強壯，應該不會讓她掉下來並且阻止她的呼吸，直到她完全失去意識但生命掌握了她的手，拒絕撒手而逝將她的氣息留在了地面 Seeing guilt has taught her guilt she’s raised on disbelief Merely twenty beautiful but with a taste for grief She has learnt all that there is to know about helplessness Seeing that no caring in this world can ease her stress 明白罪惡感只會教她更感內疚，她變得質疑一切雙十年華，美麗動人，但內心充滿悲慘早就遍嚐無助滋味明白這世上沒有任何關懷能減輕她的重擔 Helpless she lies in rope ends and undies Unseeing eyes fixating Eeyore’s smile “Over!” she cries as she’s going unblind Still in this life Still in this troubled mind The ceiling let go, the old house let her fall Dropping her breathing to the hard cold floor Hitting her head - a broken china soul Red stains on porcelain and she’s not there at all 她無助地躺在繩結和內衣之間暫盲的雙眼注視著小驢依唷的笑容「結束吧！」漸漸恢復視覺之時，她哭說仍然受困此生之中仍然受困這苦惱的心靈天花板鬆了手，老舊的房子放任她跌落將她的氣息推落堅硬冰冷的地面頭部著地－－一個破碎的脆弱靈魂紅色渲染上瓷磚，她完全失去意識 Breathing she cries for rope ends and silk ties Beautiful eyes Piglet stands shy behind Broken she lies undead and unblind Beautiful life Beautiful crying young eyes Blackened and bruised, learning how to see Staring at her tooth - crimsoned ivory Hours they pass this broken china soul Red stains on porcelain And she’s not there at all 仍在呼吸，她因為繩結和絲質領帶而哭泣小豬皮傑害羞地站在她美麗眼眸後面她躺在地面，傷而未死，也未瞎美麗的生命美麗的、哭泣的年輕雙眼悲傷黯淡，正在學習如何去看隨著時間不斷行經這破碎的脆弱靈魂紅色渲染上瓷磚而她再也沒有意識（高仕艷　譯） -- Moi, Peiere Reviere, ayant egorge ma mere, ma soeur et mon frere…… -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 118.170.72.139

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