[翻譯] Pain of Salvation - Remedy Lane １３ - 精華區 RockMetal

作者coolfly (如腐敗入骨，如身居火宅)

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標題[翻譯] Pain of Salvation - Remedy Lane １３

時間Mon Apr 27 12:02:32 2009

13. Beyond The Pale 越軌 Pain of Salvation And sex was always there From when I was only eight years Tempting me leaving me thirsty Sweat Skin A pulse divine To balance this restless mind It seemed so wonderfully physical Oh the blood, the lust The bodies that color the world All drugs to die for Won’t you share my fire? How can love make that world A minefield of forbidden ground? A map of untouchable skin And silenced desire? 而打從八歲起「性」就始終在那裡誘惑著我脫離飢渴淋漓的汗水肌膚的相親一絲天賜的悸動使這焦躁不安的心靈得以平衡噢！那血氣！那色慾！那為世界增色的肉體還有所有值得為之而死的藥物妳不想一起共享我的慾火嗎？何以愛讓那個世界像是充滿地雷的禁地？一個屬於不可肌膚相親、壓抑著慾火的區域？ And love was there in vain Profound and deep but traced with pain Too early for a child of ten Loving the pure and sane He sought the goddesses unstained Watching them turn to flesh again Hungry for both the purity and sin Life seemed to him Merely like a gallery of how to be And he was always much more human Than he wished to be But there is a logic to his world If they could only see 而愛的存在也徒勞刻骨銘心，卻也苦痛相隨一個十歲孩子體會這些太早了由於喜愛純潔與清醒他尋找未曾受玷汙的女神看著她們重新變回肉體凡胎既渴求純潔又渴求罪惡生命對他而言似乎不過是一個教導如何去做的展場而他總是比自己所希望的還要人性但假如人們認真觀看他的世界其實有規則可循 Wishing Sickened Ah - Ill Ticking 願望枯萎噢──苦惱消逝 Someone still this hunger (Mmm, it’s in my blood - ticking) Always growing stronger Budapest I’m learning Budapest you’re burning …me… 彷彿有個依然飢渴無比的人（嗯，愛在我的血液中──流逝）不斷變得更加強大布達佩斯，我正認知到布達佩斯，你在燃燒 ……我的生命…… This is not who I wanted to be This is not what I wanted to see She’s so young so why don’t I feel free Now that she is here Under me? 這不是我所願成為之人這不是我所願目睹之事她多麼年輕，但為何我難感自在？現在我正俯身在她之上？ Naked Touching Ah - Soft Clutching 赤裸的碰觸噢──溫柔的攫抓 And then after all It lead me here to wake up again Seeking a love That might make me Feel free in myself but then It proves to be Something that hurts inside When we touch So I move on I lose my way Astray I’m trying too much To feel unchained To burn out this sense of feeling cold And every day I seek my prey Someone to taste and to hold I feel alive During the split second when they smile And meet my eyes But I could cry ‘Cause I feel broken inside 結果，它領我到此，恢復清醒追尋一份本可能令我感到自在的愛情，但後來卻成為我們碰觸對方時內心的傷痛於是我離開我失去方向誤入歧途！我對此花了太多力氣反而無法感到解脫反而無法燒去這寒冷的感受每一天我尋找我的獵物某個可以品嚐可以占有的對象在那些她們微笑著看著我雙眼吉光片羽般的時刻我感到生氣蓬勃但我本該放聲大哭因為我感到內心破碎不堪 Come and drown with me The undertow will sweep us away And you will see that I’m addicted To my honesty Trust! ‘cause after all My sense of truth once brought me here But I’ve lost control And I don’t know if I am true to my soul I’ve lost control And I don’t know if I am true to my soul Losing control And I don’t know if I am true at all 來與我共同陷溺那退卻的潮水會將我們抹去你會明白我無可救藥地誠實相信我！畢竟是對於真理的追求，將我帶到此處但我失去了控制不知自己是否忠於自己的靈魂但我失去了控制不知自己是否忠於自己的靈魂我失去了控制不知自己是否還有絲毫真實 And we were always much more human than we wished to be... 而我們總是比自己所希望的還要人性 And I remember when you said You’ve been under him I was surprised to feel such pain And all those years of being Faithful to You Despite the hunger Flowing through my veins And I have always tried to Calm things down Swallow down swallow down “It’s just another small Thorn in my crown” But suddenly one day there was just Too much blood in my eyes And I had to take this walk down Remedy Lane of Whens and Whys 而我記得當妳說妳曾和他上過床我訝異自己竟感到如此痛苦這麼多年來都忠誠對待妳儘管飢渴的感受在我血管中流竄我一直都努力壓抑慾望克制再克制「這只是我王冠上的另一小根刺而已」但某天突然間太多的血映入我雙眼我必須走一趟因緣際會的靈藥巷 Empty Licking Ah - Clean Oh - Choking 空虛舔舐噢──潔淨喔──噎住 Someone still this hunger (Mmm, possessing my mind - oh, craving) Always growing stronger Budapest I’m learning Budapest I’m burning ...me... This is not who I wanted to be This is not what I wanted to see She’s so young So why don’t I feel free Now that she’s under me 彷彿有個依然飢渴無比的人（嗯，主宰我的心智──噢！充滿熱望）不斷變得更加強大布達佩斯，我正認知到布達佩斯，我在引火 ……自焚…… 這不是我所願成為之人這不是我所願目睹之事她多麼年輕但為何我卻難感自在？現在我正俯身在她之上 In the morning she’s going away In a Budapest taxi I’ve paid Seeking freedom I touched the untouched It’s too much I’m beyond the pale... 隔天早上，她離開了乘一輛布達佩斯的計程車，我出的車資為了追尋自由，我探索從未探索之地但過了頭超越了軌範…… Prematurity is the story Of both you and me And we were always much more human Than we wished to be 太過早熟正是妳我彼此間發生的事我們總是比自己所希望的還要人性 Prematurity is truly the story Of both you and me And we were always much more human Than we wished to be 太過早熟確實就是妳我彼此間發生的事我們總是比自己所希望的還要人性 We were always much more human than we wished to be We were always much more human than we wished to be We will always be more human than we wish to be We will always be so much more human than we wish to be... 我們總是比自己所希望的還要人性我們總是比自己所希望的還要人性我們始終比自己所希望的還要人性我們始終比自己所希望的來得還要人性…… （高仕艷　譯） -- Moi, Peiere Reviere, ayant egorge ma mere, ma soeur et mon frere…… -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 118.170.72.139

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