[翻譯] Estatic Fear - Chapter I

[llansonnn (lanson)]

Estatic - Chapter I  (A Sombre Dance)

The feeble leafs decline,
Enshrined in downing deep
The mourn abandoned plains,
Laid down in sombre sleep

殘葉落  空門永銘
哀荒原  陰鬱沉眠

Misty shades engulf the sky
Like past, worn memories

霧影卷天  似逝回憶

The bird's song fills the whispering breeze
With autumns melody

鳥語微風溢秋譜

he lunar pale grim shape
At evening's sight renews

待暮色 蒼月冷洌

It's silented wail relieves
Repressed thoughts anew

緘默哀號起
又無思念處

I hear the lonesome choir
Of fortunes past my way
Disdained in fiery weeps
Throughout my every day

孤命頌歌 迴響吾道
無時無刻 不再悲嘆

These skies I hail and treasure thee,
Most pleasant misery
Not pittes thorn I shelter thine
Mysterious harmony

喜愛藍天 苦惱竟也可愛
將你保護 憂慮中得平靜

Draw on most pleasant night
Shade my lorn exposed sight

愉悅之夜 引我 領我
保我 護我 赤祼之心

For my grief's when shadows told
Shall be eased in mist enfold

往事之影 霧裡淡去

Why should the foolish's hope
Thy unborn passioned cry
Exhaust unheard
Beneath this pleasent sky?
For if the dusking day declined
Could delight be far behind

未來之願  吶喊
慘暗夜晚  淡去
傾聽希望  點燃

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HI 小弟潛水很久了各位大大

雖然這不是我第一次翻譯歌詞

卻是第一次在RM版上獻醜

大家多多指教  吐槽也口以啦~

有的地方我自己也不是很有把握.....(默)

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