[翻譯] Opeth - Closure

[coolfly (如腐敗入骨，如身居火宅)]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8UHqEi8rfJk

Closure
終止
Opeth

Heal myself - a feather on my heart
Look inside - there never was a start
Peel myself - dispose of severed skin
All subsides - around me and within
治療自我──如羽毛般福至心靈
反視內在──從未真正展開蛻變
剝開自己──拋棄往日的陳舊外皮
一切平息──心內心外皆感平靜

There's nothing painful in this
There's no upheaval
Redemption for my pathos
All sins undone
過程之中不感痛苦
亦無動盪
贖償我的苦難
罪孽皆已抹除

Awaiting word on what's to come
In helpless prayers a hope lives on
'Cause I've come clean, I've forgotten what I promised
In the rays of the sun, I am longing for darkness
思忖著詞語，形容將發生之事
無助的禱詞之中，仍存一線希望
我已滌盡罪惡，忘記曾經許下的承諾
在太陽的光芒之中，我卻渴盼著黑暗


（高仕艷　譯）

--
...aye, a thousand shadows there
Shall leap and flicker and stir and stay and run,
Like petrels of the changing foul or fair;
Like ghosts of twilight, of the moon, of him
Whose homeland lies past each horizon's rim...

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