[翻譯] Opeth-Bleak

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這首是我聽Opeth的第一首 也是我嘗試翻譯的第一次
如有謬誤 還請多多指教摟

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dB1NuL-8Dhc



Opeth-Bleak



Beating
Heart still beating for the cause
Feeding
Soul still feeding from the loss
Aching
Limbs are aching from the rush
Fading
You are fading from my sight
悸動  內心仍然為之悸動
眷養  以失敗為食眷養靈魄
刺痛  軀幹自倉皇而生的刺痛
消逝  你將從我的視界消逝

Break of morning, coldness lingers on
Shroud me into nightmares of the sun
雖已破曉，椎心冰寒仍不肯離去
為我纏上壽衣埋入日魘末境

Moving
I am moving closer to your side
Luring
You are luring me into the night
Crying
Who is crying for you here
Dying
I am dying fast inside your tears
飄移  飄移至有妳之側
魅惑  妳正是那誘我入夜的魅惑者
悲鳴  誰在為妳悲鳴呢?
死亡  妳的淚水催化著我的死亡

Plunging towards bereavement faster yet
Clearing thoughts, my mind is set
急墮入哀慟淵藪
雖保清醒意識，心神已然衰敗

Devious movements in your eyes
Moved me from relief
Breath comes out white clouds with your lies
And filters through me
You're close to the final word
You're staring right past me in dismay
妳眼中閃爍的曖昧游移著
將我從救贖中拖離
妳的謊游離在白色氣息中
迫我一一沉濾
接近那最終話語時
妳將驚慌啟程離我遠去

A liquid seeps from your chest
And drains me away
Mist ripples round your thin white neck
And draws me a line
Cold fingers mark this dying wreck
This moment is mine
一絲濕潤從妳胸前滲出
將我吸榨成乾
環繞在妳細白頸側之霧
讓我被拉扯成線
冷酷纖指標記了這場死亡毀滅
而這是屬於我的時刻

Help me cure you
Atone for all you've done
Help me leave you
As all the days are gone
助我療妳
償回妳所作所為
助我離妳
一如往日已逝

重複段略

Night falls again
Taking what's left of me
夜幕再次降臨
密語著我的離去


Slight twist, shivering corpse
Ornated with water, fills the cracks
Clasped in my limbs by tradition
This is all you need
細長繩環 輕顫屍骸
浮華以水 注滿裂痕
縛我從法 汝願將償


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