[寫作班] corson - Biography

[corson (浪人劍客)]

Let me write something about biography of Newton, the most grand
scientist in the 19 century.
I have no reference about Netwon right now, so I just introduce
him by my memory.

The most famous thing is that he found the gravity from an apple
dropped into the ground. The another famous thing for me is that
he created the calculus, same as Leibniz. Actually, the time that
they both created the calculus is almost the same. But according
to the history, Newton is angry for this, and claimed that calculus
originate from him. Since I heard this thing, the evaluation of Newton
in my mind have became negative.
Netwon also studied the nature of light, and found the light is like as
particles. He also found the color of light by prism.

Overall, Netwon is the great scientist and established the base of classic
physics. His achievement must be absoluately over than I can describe.




It is my first English writing, hope someone can help me improve this.
Thank you.

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推 physheepy:I suggest you revise your article again. There are
→ physheepy:many mistakes. I'll help to give more advice when I
→ physheepy:have free time. Most important of all, I don't think
→ physheepy:Newton interpreted light as particles. This concept
推 physheepy:was under debate and has no conclusion for several
→ physheepy:century. (sorry, I miss some words. ~~ light as part
→ physheepy:-ticles in a right way.)
→ physheepy:so I don't think "found" is appropriate here
→ corson:Thank you, but I don't know the mistakes mean grammar
→ corson:problem or the description about Newton. I know "found"
→ corson:is not a appropriate word beccause I don't know much
→ corson:word to this. I wrote this by my impression only.
→ corson:If your mistakes mean this, I will be to this direction
→ corson:to revise. If it is grammar problems, please forgive me
→ corson:it is difficult to find my mistakes myself. I need some
→ corson:help. Thanks for your reply and be willing give me
→ corson:advice, that will push me post more article here.
推 oplz:這篇英文太 中式 了.