Re: [寫作班]第二週 找工作計劃 nanochen

[chileno (月月)]

※ 引述《nanochen (English)》之銘言：
:           My plan for finding a job
: I am currently a 5th year Ph. D. student and expect to
                   ^^^正式一點的文件建議用 fifth

: graduate next May. It is about time for me to find a job.
: Even I already interviewed with several companies, I am

        1.你想表達的是Even though吧？
        2.interview當主動型態的時候，表示你是主考官。
          而且用了already，時態上最好是完成式。
          所以建議改為
          Even though I have already been interviewed for several jobs..

: still interested in being a postdoctoral researcher in
: a university after graduation.
: I would like to go to some areas which are different from
                  ^^ explore更好   ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ apart from 即可

: what I am working during my Ph.D. thesis. It would be
                                    ^^^^^^這是碩論，博論多用dissertation

: advantageous if I can expand my research areas. Joining
: a bigger group would be a preferred choice for me.
           ^^^^^ What kind of group? Commercial, technological, or academic?

: The things I need to do are to prepare my CV, to ask for
: the recommendation letters, and to practice my talks.
                                                 ^^^^^^ 這是指表達能力嗎？
                                                 or communication skills?

: Time seems not enough and I have to hurry. Hope I can get
             ^^^^^^^^^^ 可用 insufficient
: an ideal position.

        前面幾位版友的建議沒錯，有些地方確實可以寫得更明確一些。
        有時只要加上一兩個形容詞就可以達成的:)

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推 nanochen:感謝指導..我突然發現我到目前其實還搞不太懂even跟
→ nanochen:even though 用法的差別..兩個都是加子句?
推 nanochen:倒數第三句的talk是指有關自己研究的報告..
→ nanochen:通常會去學校的一些研究組裡給一個報告 當作面試
推 chileno:even是副詞，even though=though，是連接詞