[寫作班] 托福第17週 yihuan,5

[yihuan (何不食肉糜)]

Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable
information.  Others think access to so much information creates problems.
Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support
your opinion.

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Some people believe that the Internet is very harmful for our life. Some
people spend lots of time surfing the Internet, and some teenage can use the
access to receive some inappropriate and illegal information easily. However,
I believe that the advantages of the Internet are more than the shortcomings
of it. By the way, I think that the Internet give us a useful way to search
some important information. The issue of on-line courses and Yahoo Knowledge
illustrate why it is.

To begin with, nowadays, more and more university set lots of on-line courses
for those people who have to work or live in other country. For example, the
on-line course of MIT is the most popular long-distance education system in
Taiwan. Many Taiwanese can find some lectures which they interest in the
system, and attend the lectures by the Internet. For example, I ever found a
MIT professor who illustrates some concepts about Al Gore's "An Inconvenient
Truth". From the lecture, I understood more details than the document movie
provides. Due to the internet, we own the easy way to find some valuable
information. On the other hand, if without the Internet, it is impossible for
Taiwanese to attend those classes and learn some useful knowledge.

Additionally, Yahoo Knowledge is another popular website which people can
find lots of information from it. Many people can ask some questions on it
and wait for others to solve those questions. Moreover, we also can find some
useful solution for our questions, because some people ever discussed the
similar questions. For example, I always find some computer information from
it. Because my major is not related to computer science, I usually need to
use computer to deal with lots of things in our lives, but sometimes there
are some little problems happened in my computer. If I ask the help from my
friend, and I have to wait for that he has the free time to fix it. Or I can
bring my computer to computer company in order to fix it. However, the two
methods are not efficient, so I always find the solutions from Yahoo
Knowledge. The way is more efficient and convenient. Therefore, people can
find lots of valuable information from Yahoo Knowledge.

In conclusion, though the Internet really cause some problems which are
harmful for our societies. On the other hand, the Internet also provides the
access to us finding some crucial information. Without the Internet, it is
impossible for us to find those useful and valuable information and knowledge
so quickly and conveniently.

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推 philJamy:超認真的耶，推！
推 philJamy:第一段I beleive that the Internet brings us more
→ philJamy:advantages than shortcomings.
→ philJamy:第二段  which they are interested in.
→ philJamy:For example, I used to find a lecture in which a
→ philJamy:第三段  where people can ....in it.
→ philJamy:People can ask questions and .....on this website.
→ philJamy:solution to our questions
→ philJamy:Because .....in my computer要不要再試著用其他方法表達
→ philJamy:I may ask for the help from my friends, and wait
→ philJamy:until he is free.
推 philJamy:However....改成 When none of the ways work, I can
→ philJamy:find....which is more efficient and.....
→ philJamy:though後面要加子句，雖然電腦帶來害處，他也提供....
→ yihuan:謝謝指正 ^^