Re: [寫作班] HIbaby, Liver

[dvlin (Dee)]

※ 引述《HIbaby (燃燒吧! 嗨~北鼻!)》之銘言：
: The liver consists several types cells that including hepatocytes,
: Kupffer cells, hepatic stellate cells, sinusoidal endothelial cells,
: and blood cells.
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推 HIbaby:Dee, 不知道這樣寫有何缺點?
這篇文章裡用的字彙還挺專業的，是不是稍加解說會比較好?
例如描述adult liver的組成，可以用這樣的句型:

  The adult liver consists of several types of cells, including hepatocytes,
  which are involved in the synthesis of protein, cholesterol, and bile;
  Kupffer cells, which recycle old red blood cells; and liver sinusoids,
  small blood vessels where the oxygen-rich blood from the hepatic artery
  meets the nutrient-rich blood from the portal vein.

分號的功用相當於逗號，但是只在中間有其他逗號，或是句子過長的時候使用:

  ... A, B, and C.
  ... A, [descrption of A]; B, [description of B]; C, [description of C].

或者有第二層清單:

  ... A, including A1, A2, and A3; B, including B1, B2, and B3; and C,
  including C1, C2, and C3.

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※ 編輯: dvlin           來自: 99.231.10.180        (12/12 03:31)
推 HIbaby:舉例說明的確很難寫..感謝,  繼續學習..