作者kapolo (膚淺國度)
看板ST-English
標題Re: [寫作班] 托福第7週 2
時間Tue Apr 8 23:39:57 2008
: 2. Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to
: save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and
: examples to support your opinion.
Because of currency is one of the most important materials for living, how
to perfectly manage the money we earn being more meaningful. We not only need
to save our dollar for the unknown future, but also have to spend our cash
for some entertainment. Both of the ways to handle our money are needed.
We should keep our money for any possible accident as animals preparing foods
for the harsh day. When the winter comes, no body can live without the
saving. People have to prepare for the next great depression.
However, we should saving money not only for the hard time, but also for the
future goals. If we plan to traveling all over the world or buying everything
we like. We need to save our money for these plans. We can not reaching our
goals by running out of the money just after we earn it.
In conclusion, we should save our money for the future. We will like our life
by doing the right decision; we can enjoy the future rather than worry it.
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※ 編輯: kapolo 來自: 61.229.136.170 (04/08 23:42)
推 djnospam:Hi, 你寫完後有沒有自己從頭檢查一遍? 比如should後面是 04/10 08:51
→ djnospam:接怎樣的動詞?(你後面有寫對,所以你知道該接甚麼) 04/10 08:51
→ kapolo:糟糕...文法常常都是靠感覺的狀態(汗@~@"") 04/12 13:56