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英文作文題目----921大地震 What was I doing when the 921 earthquake happened? In 921 earthquake, I and my girlfriend are togother. We are on the bed, doing love, I am up, and she is down. So we are up and down......together. The earthquake is more and more big, and we are more and more excited. Though my girlfriend says no, no ...... I know her heart says yes, yes...... At last, we are into high 潮 together. That day we are the happiest the day. I hope the last time is fast a little come. --End-- 【註】 評分:0分 評語:請尊重考試 呵呵!!!! 不知道是真的假的... 不過姑且不論內容... 文法也錯太多了吧... 尤其是最後一段... 真是夠了!!!!! -- 當愛情剛萌芽的時候 無法得知會有怎樣的結果 也無法想像它是甜蜜的或是酸苦的 即使是酸苦的 只要用心過 都會嚐到甜味的 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 163.13.144.40