[書信] 展覽邀請信

[afish1238 (afish)]

各位大大 小弟的主管要求我寫一封邀請信 為了3月的展覽

我寫的如下 被主管說太混 希望各位大大能夠給我一點意見

Dear sirs,

Good day to you! My name is Travis from XXX Machine company.
The main products of our company are : XXX

On March, we have attended an exhibition and it's my pleasure to invite you
for a visit.

The detail of the exhibition is shown as below:

Timtos IN 2009
Date: Mar.2 ~ Mar.7, 2009
Booth No.:
Exhibits: XXX

We will greatly appreciate if you could inform us your visit to our exhibition in advance

We look forward to seeing you in the exhibition

Regards,

煩請各位大大幫忙修正一下

謝謝

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作者: amy811 (amy) 看板: intltrade
標題: Re: [書信] 展覽邀請信
時間: Tue Jan  6 20:17:53 2009


對呀，不用搞得太長，把主要的攤位號碼…

甚至你是誰都不用自介，直接說This is XXX company...

寫一些簡單重點的公司自介…

然後把攤位寫明，這比較重要

你們也參加TIMTOS哦…是那個攤位的呀…我們也有參加咧…到時見囉...

你們在那一館呀?

※ 引述《afish1238 (afish)》之銘言：
: 各位大大 小弟的主管要求我寫一封邀請信 為了3月的展覽
: 我寫的如下 被主管說太混 希望各位大大能夠給我一點意見
: Dear sirs,
: Good day to you! My name is Travis from XXX Machine company.
: The main products of our company are : XXX
: On March, we have attended an exhibition and it's my pleasure to invite you
: for a visit.
: The detail of the exhibition is shown as below:
: Timtos IN 2009
: Date: Mar.2 ~ Mar.7, 2009
: Booth No.:
: Exhibits: XXX
: We will greatly appreciate if you could inform us your visit to our exhibition in advance
: We look forward to seeing you in the exhibition
: Regards,
: 煩請各位大大幫忙修正一下
: 謝謝

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