→ yingyi1030:有意嘗試之詩友請把握機會,可用之詞已不多矣. 61.230.0.83 04/11
推 fuchou:一二三四五140.119.194.140 04/12
→ fuchou:上山打老虎140.119.194.140 04/12
→ fuchou:老虎打不著140.119.194.140 04/12
→ fuchou:打到小松鼠140.119.194.140 04/12
→ fuchou:我這首五絕寫的不錯 哈哈140.119.194.140 04/12
→ fuchou:......我決定採用"偏旁路徑"觀察這首春雨140.119.194.140 04/12
→ fuchou:看唔140.119.194.140 04/12
→ fuchou:邊際路徑 = =||140.119.194.140 04/12
→ seamylove:一二三四五 五四三二一 61.231.211.224 04/12
→ seamylove:從一數到五 從五數到一 61.231.211.224 04/12
→ seamylove:這是在數春天的雨點 亦是春雨 61.231.211.224 04/12
→ seamylove:雖未照格律 但簡潔明瞭 鏗鏘有力 不錯不錯 61.231.211.224 04/12
推 GFDS:想必小毅應該五體投地 死而後已218.164.172.189 04/12
→ searenata:讚小毅：鬼扯卵蛋啟豪洨？自謂詩人更洨掰！ 61.231.196.119 04/12
→ searenata: 毀譽由人任笑罵，一生爽快不悲哀。 61.231.196.119 04/12
→ searenata:註：洨掰之洨讀若ㄏㄧㄠˊ。 61.231.196.119 04/12
→ searenata:我跟小毅一樣，對格律甚不熟悉，來鬧的 61.231.196.119 04/12
→ searenata:至於評價賞析，更是不敢，望小毅賞個臉。謝謝 61.231.196.119 04/12
推 yingyi1030:唉呀~ 不敢不敢, searenata兄早自成一家, 61.230.22.32 04/13
→ yingyi1030:毅豈能妄評. 今只盼jct2036兄之作矣~ 61.230.22.32 04/13