Poem of the Day
An incident of the day
that i didn't pray.
For such a pain,
to be a gain,
of this daily precaution.
Too deep in my own imagination,
unconscious my surroundings
of the running life.
As it saves us for thirst,
bathed us clean.
So pristine and pure
But so cold and hot.
In both pleasing and suffering ways.
takes its forms, due to its surroundings.
massively covers the livings.
And i on this day of the incident
becomes a victim of it.
^^guess what is "it"
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作者: Yin81 (Yin) 看板: poetry
標題: Re: Poem of the Day
時間: Mon Aug 13 19:32:34 2001
※ 引述《tigger (Clare)》之銘言：
: And i on this day of the incident
: becomes a victim of it.
: ^^guess what is "it"
Poor victim, did the boiling water hurt your hand??
From the lines, I reckon "it" is water :P
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作者: SCDoyle (SACD) 看板: poetry
標題: Re: Poem of the Day
時間: Mon Aug 13 20:10:19 2001
※ 引述《tigger (Clare)》之銘言：
: Poem of the Day
: An incident of the day
: that i didn't pray.
: For such a pain,
: to be a gain,
: of this daily precaution.
: Too deep in my own imagination,
: unconscious my surroundings
: of the running life.
: As it saves us for thirst,
: bathed us clean.
: So pristine and pure
: But so cold and hot.
: In both pleasing and suffering ways.
: takes its forms, due to its surroundings.
: massively covers the livings.
: And i on this day of the incident
: becomes a victim of it.
: ^^guess what is "it"
mmm should be more careful about the water.
Ironic isn't it. We depend on it so much yet
it can still hurt us the way anything else can.
Does it save us or does it kill us?
"that is the question. "