呵...我也出個題目
先說很慚愧的是
這首詩並沒有完成
不過
前面第一個部份可以讓各位玩個猜謎遊戲
問題一:
第一個詩節所模仿的詩是?
問題二:
這一個部份的詩所模仿的作品是?
Song From a Storyteller
1. From the Storyteller to the Audience
August is a damn good month, breeding
The bluest sea and crowded beach, mixing
Sweat and desire, squeezing
Piles of cloud to rain
In the afternoon.
Summer no longer surprises me;
Recently the shower comes so puntuately
Like a train.
I can't stand it anymore and badly
Want to smoke.
As I lighted my cigarette,
Someone patted my shoulders & said,
"Sorry, Miss. Smoking is not allowed on this train.
You have to pay the fine, that is,
Telling three stories to us,
To all the pessengers and me."
Since he look'd not so friendly and
I had no chance to run away from here,
I could only obey his rule.
So that's why I'm here
Before you, my gracious audience.
I'm a storyteller with no name,
A storyteller without fame.
I come from nowhere,
Suddenly brought on this train.
A fool you may call me if you like,
For I really don't know when all these have begun.
However, the beginning is not very important;
What counts now is my assignment.
I have to tell you three stories;
Each shall be hardly believed.
Thought it may arouse your amazement,
It's all make-believed.
The thing you can believe is called truth;
That's not the end a story goes for.
Hence I beseech you, my good audience;
Do not trust every word you've heard,
Or I shall be punished,
And all my stories won't get published.
Now I'm going to tell my first story;
It'd be so kind of you to put your attention on me.
The story's about Mariana, a lovely girl,
But often wrapp'd her face
In the deppest sorrow
Until one day someone pass'd her by,
And that has chang'd all her life.
Circa summer 1999
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作者: skyhawk (病危中 ... -.-) 看板: poetry
標題: Re: 猜猜看
時間: Sat Oct 20 17:21:58 2001
※ 引述《esoror (烤焦麵包)》之銘言：
: 呵...我也出個題目
: 先說很慚愧的是
: 這首詩並沒有完成
要完成 epic .. 尤其是這一首 是很難的呀 ^^
別慚愧囉 ..
: 不過
: 前面第一個部份可以讓各位玩個猜謎遊戲
: 問題一:
: 第一個詩節所模仿的詩是?
: 問題二:
: 這一個部份的詩所模仿的作品是?
: Song From a Storyteller
唔 .. 我再答一次好了 昨晚答了但是好像被 ptt 刪了 -.-
嗯 .... 這些題目都很有趣 我答第二題吧 .. :)
"Whan that Aprill with his shoures soote
The droghte of march hath perced to the roote,
And bathed every veyne in swich licour
Of which vertu engendred is the flour."
Chaucer's "Canterbury Tales" ;)
: 1. From the Storyteller to the Audience
p.s. ... 有趣的 parody .. 呵 ^^
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作者: esoror (烤焦麵包) 看板: poetry
標題: Re: 猜猜看
時間: Sun Oct 21 15:06:02 2001
※ 引述《skyhawk (病危中 ... -.-)》之銘言：
: ※ 引述《esoror (烤焦麵包)》之銘言：
: : 呵...我也出個題目
: : 先說很慚愧的是
: : 這首詩並沒有完成
: 要完成 epic .. 尤其是這一首 是很難的呀 ^^
: 別慚愧囉 ..
: : 不過
: : 前面第一個部份可以讓各位玩個猜謎遊戲
: : 問題一:
: : 第一個詩節所模仿的詩是?
: : 問題二:
: : 這一個部份的詩所模仿的作品是?
: 唔 .. 我再答一次好了 昨晚答了但是好像被 ptt 刪了 -.-
: 嗯 .... 這些題目都很有趣 我答第二題吧 .. :)
: "Whan that Aprill with his shoures soote
: The droghte of march hath perced to the roote,
: And bathed every veyne in swich licour
: Of which vertu engendred is the flour."
: Chaucer's "Canterbury Tales" ;)
skyhawk很厲害喲
其實你的答案也等於兩題都回答到了^^
因為第一個詩節是仿T.S. Elliot "The Waste Land"
的第一個part 在語氣上是如此的
但The Waste Land的開頭Elliot也是在模仿你所引的Chaucer的這一段
所以也算答對啦
而整個part 1也在模仿The Canterbury Tales的Gerneral Prologue
因此恭喜你答對了...:)
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作者: skyhawk (病危中 ... -.-) 看板: poetry
標題: Re: 猜猜看
時間: Sun Oct 21 16:39:52 2001
※ 引述《esoror (烤焦麵包)》之銘言：
: ※ 引述《skyhawk (病危中 ... -.-)》之銘言：
: : 要完成 epic .. 尤其是這一首 是很難的呀 ^^
: : 別慚愧囉 ..
: : 唔 .. 我再答一次好了 昨晚答了但是好像被 ptt 刪了 -.-
: : 嗯 .... 這些題目都很有趣 我答第二題吧 .. :)
: : "Whan that Aprill with his shoures soote
: : The droghte of march hath perced to the roote,
: : And bathed every veyne in swich licour
: : Of which vertu engendred is the flour."
: : Chaucer's "Canterbury Tales" ;)
: skyhawk很厲害喲
: 其實你的答案也等於兩題都回答到了^^
: 因為第一個詩節是仿T.S. Elliot "The Waste Land"
: 的第一個part 在語氣上是如此的
: 但The Waste Land的開頭Elliot也是在模仿你所引的Chaucer的這一段
: 所以也算答對啦
: 而整個part 1也在模仿The Canterbury Tales的Gerneral Prologue
: 因此恭喜你答對了...:)
呵 ... 我不敢答第一題 因為那剛好是我最喜歡的詩啊 *^^*
覺得如果我答了那一題有點不公平 .. ^^"
但是 看到有關 The Waste Land 的詩
又忍不住要答一下 .. 找好答第二題囉
其實 The Waste Land 的第一段中的 lilac
還可以扯上 Eliot 自己寫的另一首
Portrait of a Lady (我等等再 po 上來 .. ^^)
"Now that lilacs are in bloom
She has a bowl of lilacs in her room
And twists one in his fingers while she talks.
... etc.
還有 The Tempest (Shakespeare) 的 Act IV Scene I
Iris:
"Ceres, most bounteous lady, thy rich leas
Of wheat, rye, barley, vetches, oats, and peas;
Thy turfy mountains where live nibbling sheep,
And flat meads thatched with stover, them to keep;
Thy banks with peonied and twilled brims
Which spongy April at thy hest betrims
To make cold nymphs chaste crowns; and thy broom-groves,
Whose shadow the dismissed bachelor loves,
Being lass-lorn; thy pole-clipped vineyard,
And thy sea-marge, sterile and rocky-hard"
註: Ceres 是 god of fertility
還有一些其他的 .. 呵