A mother's consent
-- dedicated to Jenny
Indeed it was lovely --
The sight of a mother who has managed
To smile without a trace of grief
For her child,
Who has muttered words of hatred
And vowed to kill (later on --
Mocked the death of his grandfather
By his bleached bed-sheet-white --
He mimicked
Every gasping breath
Oh-so-vividly --
Pink with giggles) -- damned was that
Pulsing humanity.
Averted for the innocence -- I tried
To understand the incomprehensible.
Dale
29.10.2001
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作者: esoror (烤焦麵包) 看板: poetry
標題: Re: 作品 00066
時間: Tue Oct 30 20:11:02 2001
※ 引述《skyhawk (輸一百盤的覺悟)》之銘言：
: A mother's consent
: -- dedicated to Jenny
: Indeed it was lovely --
: The sight of a mother who has managed
: To smile without a trace of grief
: For her child,
: Who has muttered words of hatred
: And vowed to kill (later on --
: Mocked the death of his grandfather
: By his bleached bed-sheet-white --
: He mimicked
: Every gasping breath
: Oh-so-vividly --
: Pink with giggles) -- damned was that
: Pulsing humanity.
: Averted for the innocence -- I tried
: To understand the incomprehensible.
: Dale
: 29.10.2001
很喜歡這種念起來的感覺
I like this style and try to muse this indescribable feeling:)
加油加油!