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http://www.wretch.cc/blog/yyeric&article_id=2085069 From all the sunlight that shines through, I see traces of cheerfulness. You sing your life for me, how could I resist your beautiful high notes? At times, I kiss you at the cozy nights shared between us. Not a chance will I want to expel myself from the sphere of truth. People said that nothing would stay the same as time progresses. I simply went with a laugh and told them it’s not true. ......More -- http://www.wretch.cc/blog/yyeric [文字創作][攝影]: 在南半球呼吸著 **旅行攝影目錄:http://www.wretch.cc/blog/yyeric&category_id=442614 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 150.203.222.157
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> -------------------------------------------------------------------------- < 作者: Laird (taiwan No.ONE!!!!) 看板: poetry 標題: Re: [創作] Remembrance 時間: Tue Sep 13 15:57:09 2005 From all the sunlight that shines through, I see traces of cheerfulness. You sing your life for me, how could I resist your beautiful high notes? At times, I kiss you at the cozy nights shared between us. Not a chance will I want to expel myself from the sphere of truth. People said that nothing would stay the same as time progresses. I simply went with a laugh and told them it’s not true. For the words spoken, and all the things you do. I sensed the intimacy never learnt from the textbook. It is like tending a glass of wine, and chatting through matters that interest you. Reality isn’t as complicated as it should have to. People reminded me the darkness comes when goodbye. Notices taken, yet I will keep on with my moves. The firework won’t go off until we are wrapped in the warmth of love. Let’s enjoy the show and treasure the silence coming afterwards. I won’t bite through this lovely autumn moment, Because, the stars are just above us. People wanted to know why I badly want to keep this alive. I believe it all started after the first moment I saw you. Did you believe the timeline will freeze itself so we won’t fall apart? Will I dig out the things you wrote so I don’t forget your faces? Years have passed; the 2 of us seem still pretty close, Yet resorting to remembrance is the only thing I can do. ※ 引述《Laird (taiwan No.ONE!!!!)》之銘言: : http://www.wretch.cc/blog/yyeric&article_id=2085069 : From all the sunlight that shines through, I see traces of cheerfulness. : You sing your life for me, how could I resist your beautiful high notes? : At times, I kiss you at the cozy nights shared between us. : Not a chance will I want to expel myself from the sphere of truth. : People said that nothing would stay the same as time progresses. : I simply went with a laugh and told them it’s not true. : ......More -- http://www.wretch.cc/blog/yyeric [文字創作][攝影]: 在南半球呼吸著 **旅行攝影目錄:http://www.wretch.cc/blog/yyeric&category_id=442614 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 150.203.222.157
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