Re: [創作] Would

作者dale (冰城城主)

看板poetry

標題Re: [創作] Would

時間Wed Sep 14 13:52:09 2005

有點好奇，因為跟你之前的排版不同。:p 這個作品的讀法是每一句都分段嗎？ -- ╭──────────────────╮╭────────────╮╭─╮ │ 世界正崩毀離析，時間正傾倒頹壞。 ├┴╮http://distract.org/╭┴┤ │ ╰─┬────────────────╯ ├──────────┤ ╰┬╯ ╰──────────────────╯ ╰──╯ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 218.166.83.213

推 korn31910:拍謝剛剛改了改重新PO了一下文章 61.229.143.43 09/14

→ korn31910:其實我覺得這樣才能表達我要的感覺 61.229.143.43 09/14

→ korn31910:XD 也想試試看這種分段法看起來感覺不同 61.229.143.43 09/14

推 dale:嗯嗯，我剛揣摩了很多不同唸法。XD 218.166.83.213 09/14

> -------------------------------------------------------------------------- < 作者: korn31910 (浮出水面的大肚貓) 看板: poetry 標題: [創作] Would 時間: Wed Sep 14 14:02:12 2005 Would I see you next life? Would you have the same smile When I meet you in the same place? Would I give you my favorite songs? Then we share Something deep inside Would we? We may walk on the familiar place like before We may not notice our footsteps Would You and I repeat the same beautiful mistake And leave it in the rest of life? -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 61.229.143.43

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