[創作] Reticence

[yuuyh (自殺炸彈客)]

Till we came to the end of the shore
where there are no shells to pick,

till the waves recede
and the sun goes down,

till the night wind
ceases to blow,

and I,
i...

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推 hahastarr:and you......are brilliant! :D
推 spacedunce5:agreed! (be-verb in 2nd line tho)
推 hecati:cleverly done :) Encore!!
※ 編輯: yuuyh           來自: 180.218.53.119       (09/11 15:40)
→ yuuyh:Thx!! (forget to correct that be-verb...)
推 spacedunce5:also "wind cease" but i am willing
→ spacedunce5:to construe "wind" here as an
→ spacedunce5:aggregate noun XD
→ spacedunce5:collective, sorry
※ 編輯: yuuyh           來自: 180.218.53.119       (09/12 23:03)
→ yuuyh:GOSH, my grammar......thx!!
→ spacedunce5:i actually liked the collective
→ spacedunce5:better . . . XDDD