作者cjsheu (順哥)
看板poetry
標題[創作] Lust and lamentation
時間Sat Jul 3 11:00:52 2010
其實我是spacedunce5在養新的帳號啦,
所以本篇不列入秋之作考量。
Lust and lamentation
I dreamed of Eva, she was free
fair and beautiful, kicking her
beloved soccer ball in the wide
stone courtyard - or was it marble?
The ball flew past an ornate fountain
sprouting streams of hope from its
fleur-de-lis, like my hopes come forth
at her golden hair, flowing,
flowing. She
picked up the ball and threw it to me:
Punt it! So i did. It arched in the air
like a white pebble thrown of boredom
by the creek; it curved over an oak
mighty and stoic. i ran
to fetch it, return it, and found the white pebble
in April's hands. Gold became black, white
turned into orange, oak leaves to backboard;
a crack on the floor was a freethrow line.
A game of one-on-one ensued, she
scoring the same as i, until we
exhausted each other. She
leaned against the post, and i
posted my hand next to her head,
and she kissed me -
almost: I have a boyfriend.
NO!!
Does she not know what she is to me?
the reason i show up for class
my safeguard from falling asleep
aphrodite in these barbarous times
guinivere not yet found by the king
yet the king has found you.
I am not that king.
Then i left Freud's kingdom, and entered my own.
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推 celestial09:哈哈哈~那個NO!寫得好傳神 XD 呵呵呵 123.193.17.166 07/03 13:41
推 celestial09:笑死我了~槌槌槌 XD 哈哈哈 123.193.17.166 07/03 14:04
※ 編輯: cjsheu 來自: 140.112.115.108 (07/03 14:53)
推 hecati:那個"NO!!"深得我心啊...*淚* 140.112.25.132 07/03 18:40
推 Joelephant:I think that the "NO" is quite good, 140.112.7.59 07/03 19:04
→ Joelephant:but I would say "oh" in my case.= = 140.112.7.59 07/03 19:05
※ 編輯: cjsheu 來自: 140.112.7.59 (07/03 19:08)