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Purple clothes and Stepford Wives, galleries cuisine with southern European sun

Bathed in the shadow of love, beauty

From the lover s soul singing is something you can drink

Sunny and kissed me ink

Time and winter temperatures similar to

Holding time feels like a princess asleep and roses blooming poppy

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推 frolicker:try to refine the linguistic logic of
→ frolicker:your poems to elevate the basic
→ frolicker:understandability.nice imagery though
推 spacedunce5:to me the best part of these poems
→ spacedunce5:is the pure imagery without logic
→ spacedunce5:metaphor wqithout metonymy, as
→ spacedunce5:jakobson would say
→ spacedunce5:i'll post smthing later about this
推 sophiacccc:how do you know that I had roses
→ sophiacccc:on my cheeks last night? XD