[創作] Anam Cara

[celestial09 (Koouos :D)]

so there
you came
the poetry of sanity
the poetry of insanity
singing the Sonnet for me
so pure from heart
soothing my mind
entrenching my soul
so sincere, deep from heart
the poetry resembling our soul
is but an extention of ourself
not a phase of inanity but divinity

is it the
rhythm of love
dancing of the waltz
or the singing of the blues? :)

closing my eyes
stared by you
and be loved by you
few poems I wrote
yet you read me through
your poems I admire
holding both in beauty and light
full of talent, imagination and creativity

hearing your heartbeat
words of vivid images
dancing between types and lines
inks jumping, name calling, wound healing
spirit entwined
for fate we depart
for poetry we bound
the computer is but a vessel of
virtual art
yet the poetry sketching the sky through infinity

so, so,
I am here foretelling you
my dear kindred soul of creativity
alone we scared
together we shine  :D
pour out our heart and fill it with poetry
kindred spirit shine in eternity
tis a blessing to be held on tight
kindred souls always meet when the time is ripe
trenscending space and time
of omniscient spite!
the gate reopened, the virtuoso sings
there I praise,
open your heart to God one more time!!

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-TRUTH is the absolute Beauty embedded in mind-

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◆ From: 118.168.27.205
推 spacedunce5:Wonderful!
→ spacedunce5:can work a bit more on grammar tho
→ celestial09:funny XDD
推 spacedunce5:I mean it! "ink" jumping; for poe-
→ spacedunce5:try we "are" bound; alone we "are"
→ spacedunce5:scared; fill it "with" poetry; tis
→ spacedunce5:a "blessing" to be "held" on tight
→ spacedunce5:stuff like that--poetry has no syn-
→ spacedunce5:tax, but grammar it does.
→ celestial09:ok, ok, master of poetry.
→ celestial09:this a poem of courtesy :)
※ 編輯: celestial09     來自: 118.168.27.205       (02/07 21:27)
※ 編輯: celestial09     來自: 118.168.27.205       (02/07 21:27)
※ 編輯: celestial09     來自: 118.168.27.205       (02/07 21:28)
推 spacedunce5:I still love this poem, though!!
※ 編輯: celestial09     來自: 123.193.24.253       (02/08 00:19)
※ 編輯: celestial09     來自: 114.45.162.32        (02/08 12:55)
→ celestial09:it is a draft..needs some amendmend
※ 編輯: celestial09     來自: 123.193.24.253       (02/08 19:24)