精華區beta poetry 關於我們 聯絡資訊
wondering in a world full of fantasy exploring gold, mold, parole too much for me to behold fame, power, money, thrilling to blindhold yet my heart never grow old too much disgrace to be told the Stone of Roses mesmerizing full of turmoil and doubt roaming a thousand miles alone, of solitude digging the vapid gold the Taipei city full of connectivity swing, modern, advancement construct to be built passion fluttering in the marching wind calling my heart to dwell a sleepless town full of endless hearty charm oh! hurt not bear not I love you too much so I must left thee the dreamland of my home sweet home -- -TRUTH is the absolute Beauty embedded in mind- -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 123.193.24.253
korn31910:I like Stone Roses! 163.29.140.200 02/11 13:30
celestial09:should I change that to : 123.193.24.253 02/11 13:37
celestial09:"stone of Eagle"?? XDDD 123.193.24.253 02/11 13:37
celestial09:give me some suggestions XD 123.193.24.253 02/11 13:37
spacedunce5:How about better grammar? 61.228.180.238 02/11 15:41
spacedunce5:(Don't hit me XD) 61.228.180.238 02/11 15:41
celestial09:shoot! just tell me directly 123.193.24.253 02/11 15:45
celestial09:you are smarter in this subject 123.193.24.253 02/11 15:46
celestial09:than me. XDD 123.193.24.253 02/11 15:46
spacedunce5:I'd lvoe to, but you never log on 61.228.180.238 02/11 15:52
spacedunce5:to MSN 61.228.180.238 02/11 15:52
※ 編輯: celestial09 來自: 123.193.24.253 (02/11 16:22)
korn31910:Personally I prefer "stone of Eagle" 59.115.176.191 02/11 21:04