作者celestial09 (Koouos :D)
看板poetry
標題[創作] Cloister
時間Thu Jun 10 13:19:56 2010
The sunset slips in
with a gentle touch
Along the cloister
The wind passionately
echoes
echoes
echoes
ghostly wonder -
The last leaf falls on our textbook
years of longing, reminisce of decadence
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※ 編輯: celestial09 來自: 123.193.24.253 (06/10 13:28)
推 spacedunce5:not bad; a bit of a twist ending 140.112.7.59 06/10 13:57
※ 編輯: celestial09 來自: 123.193.24.253 (06/10 16:25)
→ celestial09:我想把 descendence 改成 ascendance 123.193.24.253 06/10 21:21
→ celestial09:可是那就不符合我以前現實的狀況了XD 123.193.24.253 06/10 21:22