[創作] Vision

[celestial09 (Koouos :D)]

        When the sun arises in the middle of the sky
        The earth turned all flamboyant

        The stars turn yellow, calling,
        ancient rivers in the vein
        so passionately echoing
        flowing deeper and deeper
        transcending to current stream of vision

        A world so broad and sublime
        as the ancient rivers
        sending embracement to the mighty ocean
        In the great time of the universe
        The tide is coming in
        calling the power of mother earth

        The national banner becomes visible from ages of darkness
        aiming higher, and higher
        never rests it's longing for freedom

        Even under the dawn glow
        I saw gleaming winds of gold, purple, crimson
        glorifying the ancient yellow river

        Steady but moderate-

        The time has changed
        The twilight becomes
        The green island of wonder faded out
        through cross strait ocean

        Steely mirror of the stream
        reflecting the sun
        Along the ocean, besides the river
        -Formosa the beautiful

        In the dusk
        The great leader of vision,
        reached out his gentle hands, hoeing,
        muds turn golden, turn salted, turn sweet bittered
        The seperation and union of time

        which history can never reject

        I saw the eclipse of a new moon
        As ancient as the yellow river



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莫聽穿林打葉聲，何妨吟嘯且徐行。
竹杖芒鞋輕勝馬，誰怕?一簑煙雨任平生。
料峭春寒吹酒醒，微冷，山頭斜照卻相迎。
回首向來蕭瑟處，歸去，也無風雨也無晴。

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※ 編輯: celestial09     來自: 123.193.24.253       (06/10 18:56)
→ celestial09:啡啡啡啡  好好玩喔 ^.^
推 spacedunce5:stanza2 line1 [logic] illogical!
→ spacedunce5:the stars do not turn yellow with
→ spacedunce5:the dawn!!
→ spacedunce5:xd
→ celestial09:the stars turn yellow in 日正當中^^
→ celestial09:therefore, still logical 嘿嘿嘿 XD
※ 編輯: celestial09     來自: 123.193.24.253       (06/11 00:34)
推 leighmeow:I LOVE this poem !
→ leighmeow:REALLY beaitiful and realistic and
→ leighmeow:poetoc1
→ leighmeow:poetic!
→ celestial09:Thanks! I love echoes but not fame!
→ celestial09: ^___^
※ 編輯: celestial09     來自: 118.168.24.148       (06/11 15:10)