作者celestial09 (Koouos :D)
看板poetry
標題[創作] What is a poem?
時間Mon Aug 9 10:36:08 2010
A poem is like
An idea enchanted with Christ
A feeling so strong, so passionate, of ecastacy
Expressed as a song, a verse, or a muse
You feel like expressing your genuine self
who has been lost a million years in your soul
And it suddenly came back to visit you
There you kiss every fragment of your own sorrows
When the feelings flow
every fume a different color
every sorrow a different shade
Pretending you lost in the world of maze
you mix and paint it with amazing grace
With unbearable feelings of sensitivity
Wisdom and delight shine through hardship
Streams of ascendence
Striking to walk in parades
Out of this worldy painful gaze
Oh you chase!
Chasing the ideas like wind,
playfully, with peace and joy
Your sensitivity is like the colors
in which the palettes desides to mix with the life of water
You paint, you brush
like compulsively craving
the missing part in your soul
You breeze, you dive, you hurt,
you sweetly mourn
you gently sigh
with loving ecastacy
with bittersweet feelings lingering sensitively
A poet's music is like when you play jazz piano
with obsessive improvisations
healing your incomplete soul
deeply
Resilienting your energy to
Express your own definition of Beauty
Expanding with elasticity
After you finished painting the whole picture
you sing with peace and joy
with enrichment in your emasculated soul
you recover from self-complacency
And sweetly sigh
hm....aren't us poets lovely? :)
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開始於無邪 靜止於純潔
一夕之間下起你的雪....
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※ 編輯: celestial09 來自: 140.112.4.118 (08/09 14:57)
推 hahastarr:Why not sing while painting? or is it 122.62.57.74 08/09 15:10
→ hahastarr:just me? lol 122.62.57.74 08/09 15:10
→ celestial09:hoho, pretty we can sing and paint 140.112.4.118 08/09 15:17
→ celestial09:on this board together~ :P 140.112.4.118 08/09 15:17
※ 編輯: celestial09 來自: 140.112.4.81 (08/10 02:34)
※ 編輯: celestial09 來自: 140.112.4.81 (08/10 02:35)