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Lest I turn my heart to you Asking for your mercy - the only place I can trun to And I cry For what a world it dwells on? Justice buried underneath And I, seek the cloud upon your thron. And I cry, asking for your fountain of wisdom and delight Yet Satans' power has broken in verse rivers overflowing in dirt And wish I may, die, if I cry, For if narrow is the gate and constricted is the way And I may, wish, my tears, will enter into your kingdom of the heavens Thus my innocence preserved; my conviction observed. For it is Turth they deny - evidence upon deception. And I may, sigh - even the whole world is against me, I shall, dwell, my faith, upon thy hill where True love prevails only when we love our enemy There, I saw the sun, shinning -universally- -- -TRUTH is the absolute Beauty embedded in mind- -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.112.4.87
spacedunce5:your poetic thoughts are almost 61.228.78.13 09/14 07:59
spacedunce5:always great, but please, please 61.228.78.13 09/14 07:59
spacedunce5:pay more attention to grammar and 61.228.78.13 09/14 07:59
spacedunce5:spelling; you may write poetry only 61.228.78.13 09/14 07:59
spacedunce5:for yourself, but on this board 61.228.78.13 09/14 07:59
spacedunce5:there are judges who have to 61.228.78.13 09/14 07:59
spacedunce5:compare and select: your mechanical 61.228.78.13 09/14 08:00
spacedunce5:errors complicate this process and 61.228.78.13 09/14 08:02
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spacedunce5:i'm not reprimanding you, this is 61.228.78.13 09/14 08:02
spacedunce5:just a small reminder :) 61.228.78.13 09/14 08:02
celestial09:Thanks buddy! No worries, I am not 140.112.24.158 09/14 09:36
celestial09:offended at all. :) You are just a 140.112.24.158 09/14 09:36
celestial09:friend who speaks of the truth. XD 140.112.24.158 09/14 09:37
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